Feedback
Positives:
Nice ideas in terms of style.
Good sense of humour coming through already.
Research also suggests the comedic tone of the documentary.
Negatives:
1. In need of a title.
2. Boost scene 4 content - does it link to him going on stage?
3. What is the use of the priory as a location?
My Response To The Feedback
1. In need of a title. The reason I have not chosen a title is because I wanted to wait until after I had filmed the majority of my footage. This is because I wanted to name my documentary after something Alex says during the actual feature. I think this would not only generate a random but also relevant title, but would reinforce the idea that the documentary is completely based on Alex.
2. Boost scene 4 content - does it link to him going on stage? Scene 4 is all about how he got to where he was. the reason he visits his school on this particular day is because he wants to personally invite his old Head Master to his announcement later on in the day. While Alex is at his old school, he interacts with old teachers, adoring fans and year 7s who have been taught about his importance.
3. What is the use of the priory as a location? I would like to use the priory as the location for the announcement itself. This is because the old priory building has a hall that we could possibly use and this would be quite easy to fill with people, or create the effect that it was full of people. I also think a short interview with Alex before he goes on stage about how he is feeling etc would be good and I want to film this in front of the old priory building.
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