FIRST CUT - Feedback

Construction Criteria	Comment
Holding Shot Steady	Excellent
Framing of Shots	Excellent
Appropriate Material for Task	Yes! Very clear storyline and good use of documentary conventions.
Selecting Mise En Scene (colour, lighting, props, setting)	Nice variety which suits your chosen storyline well.
Editing for Meaning	Good, but not clear what the main event is yet.
Varied Shot Transitions and Post Production Effects	Great verisimilitude achieved and a sense of professionalism.
Use of Sound	Quality of dialogue is excellent, music needed but only subtle.
Use of Titles	Nice titles to introduce your characters. Opening titles and end credits needed.
Overall Comment	I predict this will be a very high level 4 when finished girls, you just need to continue to keep up the high standard of footage, and edit it together in the same minimalist and professional manner.

 

0-14 = Level 1

15-23 = Level 2

24-31 = Level 3

32-40 = Level 4